Here's my thought vis. the League movie.
1) The Rise of the Hero Desmond
a) Desmond was Born, and he was Dead.
b) The Youth of Desmond [v. brief] and the Quest for Durendal.
c) The Acquisition of Durendal. [Archbishop Turpin is involved]
d) King Kessler's First Request.
e) The Slaying of the Bear-Weasel. [this is an edit]
f) King Kessler's Second Request.
2) The Rise of the Ratte-Kinge Galgamoth
a) The Ratte-Kinge was born, and he did eat his own dunge.
b) The Youth of the Ratte-Kinge
c) The Subjugation of Isselunde, and the Founding of the Ratte-Kingedom.
d) The Tyranny of the Ratte-Kinge.
3) The Fall of the Ratte Kinge and the Restoration of the Rightful Monarch of All the Realms of Isselunde by the Truest of Heroes Desmond who didde wield the Holy Blade Durendal.
a) The Finding of the Ratte Kinge.
b) The First Battle between Villain and Hero.
c) The Finding of the Ratte Kinge.
d) An Unfortunate Mistake.
e) The Finding of the Ratte Kinge.
f) The Final Battle between Villain and Hero.
g) The Acclaim of the People.
h) The Restoration of King Kessler.
fin.
What do you think?
EDIT (2): Two scenes removed: 2c, the Timmaraque Angel, and 3c, the Acclaim of the People.
Friday, May 11, 2007
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Since the original idea was for the movie to be a retelling of the original Kronikkles by David, could you edit it to only include these elements, or add a little symbol or something next to the parts you added? Right now it's a bit confusing as to which parts were there originally and which parts weren't. I was under the impression that the storyline was the only part of the movie that was nonnegotiable, and that the stuff we would fill in would be camera angles and props and dialogue and pacing and other movie-type stuff.
The only thing he added were the bear weasels, and elaborations of the meetings between Desmond and the Ratking.
kthx
And the Galgamoth bit, as it's based on his non-Davidian work; according to http://unterseeboot.blogspot.com/2007/03/kronnikels.html , Galgamoth was the Ratte-Kinge's birth name. That looks to be it. Nikolas, confirmation?
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